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Rhetoric

Rhetoric is commonly understood as the art of persuasion or effect-oriented communication. Since the 1960s, there have been various attempts to extend rhetoric from speech to visual communication and to design in general. Design rhetoric addresses the effects of artifacts and especially the techniques by which they can be generated and controlled in the design process. The central problems of this approach are the identification of effects and the validation of rules linking design aspects to specific effects. The goal of this article is to demonstrate how these problems can be dealt with by means of a triangulation of analysis, expert judgments, practice-based research, and laboratory experiments. The suggestions made are based on the results and methods developed over the course of two Bern University of the Arts research projects on visual rhetoric in commercial graphics and public-transport information design. While advertising and mass communication theory as well as the psychology and sociology of media are generally more interested in the macrostructural and postcommunicative effects of their objects of investigation (that is, how they affect actions, purchase decisions, quality of life, social structures, or mental equilibrium of users and receivers), the design-theoretical approach presented here is concerned with the micro-structural impact levels: the immediately detectable effects resulting from the formal composition of designed objects, effects that are grounded in the appearance, and sometimes even in the intrinsic properties of things (that is, what kind of primary impression they make on the viewer). In the first two sections, a short introduction to design rhetoric is provided–particularly for readers not yet familiar with the topic–and the main focus and hypotheses of the approach are presented. In the remaining sections, the methods of ascribing effects to design artifacts applied in the two projects are outlined and the arising difficulties and possible ways of overcoming these difficulties are discussed.

PROFESSIONAL REFLECTION

This lesson plan is one of my favorites to work with over the past few years, because it allows students to actively engage with texts in the library in a new way and it showcases the abilities of some of our most creative students in a lasting way. We worked with a larger student base our second year and included students in the first-year design class as well, which provided a very diverse offering of products. Being able to show the examples from the previous year of what was done right and what needed fixing was a definite advantage our second year. We also found that proofreading was not a priority for students our first year; in the second, the teacher required students to have multiple classmates proof their work before it could be submitted.

In our second year, we also allowed students from different classes to choose the same book which meant we did end up with a few duplicates. Also, the top designs chosen by the students for each class were not necessarily the top designs chosen by the teacher and the library staff. This is why we printed out more covers than just the class winners–these designs could be called the honorable mention or staff picks category.

I have made one alteration to the lesson plan that I plan to include next year, because I think it will provide the students a better understanding of their own personal design opinions–the process of students selecting books they find appealing and unappealing and deciding why will hopefully allow them to gain the perspective of the consumer, not just the designer. At the completion of the projects, I think making a formal presentation is ideal, because students must defend their choices, which may, in turn, prompt more thoughtful designs. Next year, I also hope to involve students more in the process of nominating books for makeovers. We are very excited to begin this project again next year, and I think these few minor changes will make the process even more student centered and produce even better designs.

The design teacher said this was one of his students’ favorite assignments–mainly because they were creating a product for a real purpose that they could eventually see on display in the real worlds

PROCEDURES FOR COMPLETION

The teacher and librarian will complete this lesson collaboratively. The librarian can complete the introduction of the assignment and participate in the creation, modification, and delivery of formative assessments. The graphic design teacher will work with students on creating their book covers using a design program such as Adobe Photoshop, Microsoft Publisher, or any software that allows desktop publishing and formatting. The teacher will assess students based on design class standards.

PROCEDURES FOR COMPLETION:

The class visits the library. The librarian discusses with students the importance of the book cover in marketing-relating the idea to commercials, theatrical trailers, cereal boxes, etc. A book cover should inspire someone to choose the book to borrow or purchase.

Students then search the library shelves for examples of book covers that they find both appealing and not appealing. As a group, the students complete a list of reasons why book covers would inspire them to read or purchase a book (or leave it on the shelf).

Pull (or have students pull) a cart of fiction/nonfiction books that have unattractive or dated covers that could have a higher checkout rate if the cover were designed differently. For our projects, one year we chose fiction titles, and the next year we chose nonfiction titles. We pulled books we thought would be appealing to students based on subject, but that had covers that were decidedly not appealing Students (library aides, reading groups, etc.) could easily help in selection process.

Students in the design class should be allowed to select their own book to redesign. To avoid redundancy (and improve student assessment), we suggest that no two students in a class redesign the same cover. Students are not required to read the books prior to completing their book covers.

COMPLETION OF PROJECT

When all projects are completed, students vote on the top three designs for each class. Voting can be done in many ways. For one, students can present their designs to the class explaining why they chose their design elements and why their book cover is better than the original. Votes are based on the design and the presentation. Or, students could vote for the designs only. This past year, we had classes vote for the top designs from another period. For example, period 1 voted for the top from period 5. The best designs from each class were then displayed in the library for the student body to vote on. (I printed them on regular paper and displayed the new design next to the book with its current cover). We encouraged teachers to bring their classes to vote as well as for individual students to stop by before/after school or during lunch. The designs voted as the top three by the student body received prizes from the library (donated by community sponsors).

The final step of our process is to replace the old book covers with the students’ new designs. The first year, we printed out all of the completed covers as we only worked with one class. The second year, we printed all of the top winners from each class and ones that the library staff thought stood out as well. Our district printing office printed color copies of the winning covers on proof paper and cut them to size. We then placed the new cover over the old and fitted the book with new plastic covers. These books are now in regular circulation within the library.